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bcbwrick Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Professional General Artist
When characters, lettering or objects overlap the panel borders, it can expand the action and give more dynamism to the page.  Here, you have used it very well to capture motion and force.  The only exception would be the fifth panel.  Action actually becomes muddled and lost due to the overlap with both panel four and panel six.  I might have pulled the fist from panel six totally away from the face in panel five.  That tangency alone forces my eye in an abrupt way.  This is otherwise another strong, interesting page!  RICK
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OneSheepArmy Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Traditional Artist
The fifth is the "weakest" panel in the page also because of the non-centered action (seems like is the onomatopoeia the main element).
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bcbwrick Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Professional General Artist
I see that.  Nothing wrong with a sound effect taking center stage once in a while (if you mean it to).  My greater concern is with the overlaps actually creating a situation in panel five where the action is trapped and grinds to a halt.  Many different fixes if you decide to tinker with it.  I actually recommend leaving it alone and pushing forward with an eye on future pages to check the design for overall page movement.  I am a big fan of your work.  RICK
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OneSheepArmy Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014   Traditional Artist
Yeah, I usually do like that. Thank you very much!
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Enoa79 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Decisamente un combattimento avvincente. Mi piace come dai il senso del movimento.
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OneSheepArmy Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014   Traditional Artist
Grazie! Tanto Dragon Ball da piccolo servito! :D
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Enoa79 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
:D
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TheYuanTwins Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a really great page!  Have you ever considered using water colors on your art?  We think they would really compliment your style well!
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OneSheepArmy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014   Traditional Artist
They are my "weapon of choice" for covers and illustrations. I'm for a kinda sketchy-style, both in b/w and colored works.
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TheYuanTwins Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Where are your covers?!  We didn't see any in your gallery!
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