When characters, lettering or objects overlap the panel borders, it can expand the action and give more dynamism to the page. Here, you have used it very well to capture motion and force. The only exception would be the fifth panel. Action actually becomes muddled and lost due to the overlap with both panel four and panel six. I might have pulled the fist from panel six totally away from the face in panel five. That tangency alone forces my eye in an abrupt way. This is otherwise another strong, interesting page! RICK
I see that. Nothing wrong with a sound effect taking center stage once in a while (if you mean it to). My greater concern is with the overlaps actually creating a situation in panel five where the action is trapped and grinds to a halt. Many different fixes if you decide to tinker with it. I actually recommend leaving it alone and pushing forward with an eye on future pages to check the design for overall page movement. I am a big fan of your work. RICK
I've uploaded just a few, silly ones (flagged as "mature content"), but I prefer to upload comic panels, hoping to talk about comics storytelling and other "technical" stuff (but it happens rarely). Covers/pinups/illustrations are too mainstream, ahah!